Down
through the chaotic frenzy of the shallows,
A mushroom cloud of silt puffs up
when you touch bottom, not that you can see it
-you only feel it whisper against your cheek,
(Written at the Blue Monk during a Sunday night performance
by the free jazz quartet Battle Hymns & Gardens, 3/04/12)
past the congested coral maps,
through darting quicksilver traffic, through the matted net of sea grass,
this is where the music drags you:
under
using
composition as a cacophonous anchor,
a chunk of discord sinking like an iron lung through the murk,
composition as a cacophonous anchor,
a chunk of discord sinking like an iron lung through the murk,
trailing a necklace of tiny glass beads
behind it
as it plunges down
through pages of algae,
down through miles of blue glass turning gradually black.
through pages of algae,
down through miles of blue glass turning gradually black.
A mushroom cloud of silt puffs up
when you touch bottom, not that you can see it
-you only feel it whisper against your cheek,
a billowing hem of silky dust, followed by
a slap and a thump.The lights blink on,
the underwater nightclub lit by
a slap and a thump.The lights blink on,
the underwater nightclub lit by
toothy, illuminated ghouls that float
like paper lanterns through the murk.
like paper lanterns through the murk.
In the glow cast from their luminescent bellies,
you can see, not the Titanic's band
but a jazz quartet of sub-aquatic maniacs.
Witness the bass, tilted like the hull
of a sunken ship, with fingers crabwalking
you can see, not the Titanic's band
but a jazz quartet of sub-aquatic maniacs.
Witness the bass, tilted like the hull
of a sunken ship, with fingers crabwalking
up and down the mast; the twin saxophones,
encrusted with barnacles, their diving bell cavities
creaking and honking with underwater pentatonics
creaking and honking with underwater pentatonics
to summon a
herd of crustaceans
that thunder across the ocean floor,
that thunder across the ocean floor,
rattling their armor and lashing their antennae wildly about.
Your ears grows accustomed to the pressure of the deep,
picking up faint screams of feedback echoing off a distant reef,
a tape loop bellowing from the blow hole of a leviathan
rumbling past on the rainy avenue upstairs.
a tape loop bellowing from the blow hole of a leviathan
rumbling past on the rainy avenue upstairs.
The drums bang
tsunami numbers, mocking the rumble and rush of the tide,
followed by a long moment of the abyss’s crushing silence
before rattling and banging like an endless avalanche.
before rattling and banging like an endless avalanche.
Strange papery creatures pulse and flutter to the improvisation,
but finally become so sluggish and dense
they can barely move.
A gaping mouth in the rock hisses,
snoring in its sleep, belching bubbles of gas.
Its lips are rimmed with wormy hairs, undulating gently,
the sea floor populated with sucking tribes of polyps that feed
on your improvised dreams
well after the music has faded
well after the music has faded
and the divers have returned their instruments
to those ominous black cases, giving a tug on the line,
hauling everything back up to a trawler on the surface.
Emerge slowly; take some time to acclimate,
to prevent yourself from getting the bends
to prevent yourself from getting the bends
as you ascend the stairs and step out into the night,
accompanied by the clamor of car horns and crowds
which, now that you hear it, actually sounds
a lot like music.
accompanied by the clamor of car horns and crowds
which, now that you hear it, actually sounds
a lot like music.
by the free jazz quartet Battle Hymns & Gardens, 3/04/12)
I love how this is structured like jazz & I'm glad you noted that in the footnote. I like the riffing off the initial stanza's metrical theme throughout the poem. I like the way the stanzas are used to mimic the sense of sinking that the eye does when reading a poem with many short lines. Especially effective on my computer screen. Was that part intentional?
ReplyDeleteI wonder if you 1/2ed the lines & doubled their length for the last stanza, if that would help the poem or not. (not sure)
Very enjoyable. Thanks.