Misfortune oozes through the air
this chill and dreadful night in late October,
and it smells remarkably similar
to breaded chicken sizzling in the deep-frier.
Squatting on a stoop, I luxuriate blissfully
and it smells remarkably similar
to breaded chicken sizzling in the deep-frier.
Squatting on a stoop, I luxuriate blissfully
in the irresistible odor of oily batter
that wafts from the vents
of the Cajun restaurant’s kitchen.
that wafts from the vents
of the Cajun restaurant’s kitchen.
I
can taste that crispy skin, can feel
the hot grease trickle down my stubbly chin.
the hot grease trickle down my stubbly chin.
The sushi place across the street exudes
no olfactory evidence
no olfactory evidence
of
the hand-rolled ghosts and quiet rice
no doubt waiting patiently within.
The flimsy paper lanterns in the window
seem chintzy and unambitious.
no doubt waiting patiently within.
The flimsy paper lanterns in the window
seem chintzy and unambitious.
By contrast, the chicken shack is boisterous
and garishly lit, ejecting a crowd of patrons
from its noisy gullet.
and garishly lit, ejecting a crowd of patrons
from its noisy gullet.
The chattering crowd staggers along
the pavement
like a brain-addled millipede. Flames flicker
within
the revelers’ cupped palms,
lapping at the tips of their cigarettes.
As they pass, I ask to bum a smoke
and one of them taps a menthol from its pack,
holds the lighter steadier than I’d be able to.
lapping at the tips of their cigarettes.
As they pass, I ask to bum a smoke
and one of them taps a menthol from its pack,
holds the lighter steadier than I’d be able to.
Leaves
lie at my feet, little solar panels stripped
and, having served their purpose,
now find themselves laid off from the limbs
where they’ve labored their entire lives.
and, having served their purpose,
now find themselves laid off from the limbs
where they’ve labored their entire lives.
The empty oxygen factories flash their skeletons
in an attempt to frighten the sated patrons,
in an attempt to frighten the sated patrons,
but
the revelers remain laughing and oblivious,
their heads swirling with spirits,
their heads swirling with spirits,
bodies lifted into the night, bellies fluttering
with a flock of tiny wings.
with a flock of tiny wings.
ugh...so much texture and smells in your piece..vivid...you had me there and i am not sure i want to be...
ReplyDeleteBoy, I loved this piece--I loved the smells, and the sounds and the word choice---
ReplyDeleteLeaves lie at my feet, little solar panels stripped and, having served their purpose,
now find themselves laid off from the limbs
Very satisfying read!
Audrey
@AudreyHowitt
Leaves lie at my feet, little solar panels stripped
ReplyDeleteand, having served their purpose,
now find themselves laid off from the limbs
where they’ve labored their entire lives.
That stanza says a lot to me. I like it when poetry captures Alludes to other relities with images like this.
You've cast quite a spell for the psyche and the taste-buds-- brilliant. xxj
ReplyDeleteSeconds, please.
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